A God's Death

[euthanasia]

He did not see what is
He never expected that much
He never truly understanded His own
He could not perceive what was being done
He can not see me
For what I truly am
His son.

Lying above the grass
All life has passed on by
AS white as His first thought
That smile so great and doomed
Forever gazing at the child of His mind
Died a cruel death
Giving birth to us.

[psilomind]

Not to nitpick or anything, but its understood, not understanded...

Anyway, I really like this one. The whole concept is very interesting, and I think the poem explains it well; which doesnt leave much room for interpretation, but still fails to diminish the quality of the poem. Good work.

[Cronos]

Originally posted by psilomind
Not to nitpick or anything, but its understood, not understanded...


Check the location first.