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[smirk]

i got zero response from anyone to my last thing so im gonna try one more
i guess no response is better than everyone sayin it sucked right

i am the dark
a last falling dream
colder than absolute
a final choked off scream

i'm in your mind every time you sleep
you are my doorway you make my way complete

i will come sneakin through all your silent fears
my name is called desolation
my blood is all your tears

feast on subterfuge, drink bachanal
you restore my faith in the ways of man

replentish your need for suspicion
murder follows suit
i will lead with greed
and soon the games afoot

my name is called perversion
the father of all lies
and when i see the skins marching
it fills me with delight
its not the inquisition
but for now it will suffice

so rise up young gommorans
you know the time is right
take to the streets in anger
i am the lord of flies

i taught bad john the viper every thing he knew
and if i'd met his killer i would have showed him too

[GregoryWohlwend]

actually i would say apathy is the worst "feeling" if you wanna call it that; which a person could express towards anything, inanimate or animate.

by the way i had to shit like a duck after reading your poem ;)

[smirk]

good point about apathy
not sur what to make of your other statement

[psilomind]

Originally posted by GregoryWohlwend
actually i would say apathy is the worst "feeling" if you wanna call it that; which a person could express towards anything, inanimate or animate.

by the way i had to shit like a duck after reading your poem ;)

ive never seen a duck take a shit...

[smirk]

i dont know what he meant by that
maybe he meant it was scary, i was hopin for some feedback but i guess ill have to get that from my guitar
maybe if i post another one, maybe I'm dreaming

[GregoryWohlwend]

duck shit is runny, not solid... take it literal or otherwise.

[Cronos]

I guess that was a poem and not lyrics right? I like that you used some nice vocabulary, and made references to certain areas to help get the point across. You got that going for you.

[smirk]

thanks Cronos, I was wondering when I might see someone from socialize over here
its a poem, thats how my lyrics start then ill modify em to fit the music

[Cronos]

I've been posting here for awhile actually. I just don't keep up because it's so slow. If you'll do some searches, I have been in some OLD threads. Masturbation should turn up something, or masturbate. I didn't do it though...