the forge

[smirk]

hi, i'm steve the new guy from peoria
here's somthin i wrote called the forge

the forge breathes
energies within
coliding-combining
iron and thoughts
become fluid

the beast lifts itself
from moorings in reality
striding forward
it screams a thousand harmonies
lightining and thunder
beg for mercy
when she sings

twisting grinding flailing climbing
it claims the unknown
parameters shatter
doors open
foundation splits
floor turns and shifts
threads of reason unwind
collide in streams of consiousness

unknown colors
srtrike the anvil
the cauldron concieves a new creature
to dance with the beast

feel the steel
a chromium dream
the feast complete
the forge breathes

i wrote this in i think 1989 but ive always liked it
what do you think, am i worthy to post more?