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euthanasia
03-07-2003, 04:47 PM
(this was my first writing ever)


-Euthanasia-

Pain – merciful death
An agonic experience
Come share it with me
Pain shoving my mind
No thought alive
No memoria inside
This bed is my lair
Numbed as I am
My body lies moveless
Myself lies somewhere else
Morality, conceptuality………stupidity
The nerves are there but they feel not
Just one thought (pain)
Just one desire (death)
Freedom, obscure
Come free my soul
Legal, moral, its no shame
Come on show me your mercy
Can you look at me?
Can you understand me?
Come on free my soul
I push you, I urge you
My friend, my father, my son
Cut the breath
Take the life
Freedom is mine




(i have just dig this up from my computer, it fascinates me to remember my thoughts and worries at the time I wrote this, by the way, pretty bad)

Nirvana
03-08-2003, 12:03 AM
i think its kinda nice... strong writing... LIKE IT!


Meaningless Post:):-:(Nirvana):-:(

Phosphoros
03-08-2003, 09:28 AM
Creo que debo presentarte a un amigo mío, o mandarte algo de su poesía, pues escribe muy similar a tí.

Por cierto, veo que este es tu foro favorito.

delenda est ecclesia!

Nirvana
03-09-2003, 05:23 AM
stop the fucking spanish shit!


Meaningless Post:):-:(Nirvana):-:(