Critique wanted on new song

[Neill Fraser]

Recorded and wrote this new song a couple of days ago. Only an acoustic demo at the moment. Go to www.garageband.com/artist/hail and download "Call It a Lie" and post your thoughts in this thread.

Cheers,
Neill

[bringerofbasses]

Although I was stupid and accidentally clicked on something that ended up making your song stop... what I heard was very good. Very good, indeed ...strong vocals, nice guitarwork. A full group should be interesting, that is...if you intend on making it a full group song.

[Neill Fraser]

Anyone else?

[passenger#44213]

Yes. This is very much my bag baby.
The only critisim (if thats how you spell it) is the recording.
The song still sounds great but an improved recording would be cool but other than that its beatiful. As was stated before good guitar and very good and emotional vocal and may i also comment on a good songwriting ability.