Aenimal
02-18-2003, 12:52 PM
Hey, i posted this Poem in the other thread love thread but i didn't get any feedback. It's a peice i wrote for my girlfriend and I'm going to give it to her thursday. I'd like to hear your opinions on it.
Gaia's Gift
Just as every cycle, mine starts in chaos.
The winter's been long and depressive.
It's radical winds have blurred my vision
Keeping me from finding my destination.
But our mother is not without compassion,
Within her kingdom lies the ultimate secret;
Every cycle has it's polarities of dark and light
Just as every child has a soul and a mate.
And though the northern winds still blow,
I feel my equinox is finally upon me
For the darkness in my life
Has been subdued by your light.
Just as every being, my destination is clear
My journey; however, is ever-twisting
Through this labyrinth of life, I wander
Searching for the path ever-pondered..
But our mother is not without compassion,
Within her kingdom lie the ultimate guardians;
Every soul's way is guided by its mate
whom, earth risen, shall return you to it in love.
Now after a journey so long, I'm confronted
By your spirit so earthly, so divine, so soothing.
In this maze of mirrors, your eyes are the only windows,
Feeding me utopic scenes of the way through this life.
Facing you, my guardian, I am silently rejuvenated.
A thousand desires appeased, yet a thousand born.
You've a gaze that lures me,
A scent that delights me,
A voice that calms me,
A touch that mends me,
And a radiance that heals me.
We needn't look to the skies for heavenly destiny,
Its path is from earth, on earth and to the earth.
Its treasures are amongst us and within us.
They need simply be acknowledged.
And I acknowledge that you are
Gaia's Gift.
Thoughts?
Gaia's Gift
Just as every cycle, mine starts in chaos.
The winter's been long and depressive.
It's radical winds have blurred my vision
Keeping me from finding my destination.
But our mother is not without compassion,
Within her kingdom lies the ultimate secret;
Every cycle has it's polarities of dark and light
Just as every child has a soul and a mate.
And though the northern winds still blow,
I feel my equinox is finally upon me
For the darkness in my life
Has been subdued by your light.
Just as every being, my destination is clear
My journey; however, is ever-twisting
Through this labyrinth of life, I wander
Searching for the path ever-pondered..
But our mother is not without compassion,
Within her kingdom lie the ultimate guardians;
Every soul's way is guided by its mate
whom, earth risen, shall return you to it in love.
Now after a journey so long, I'm confronted
By your spirit so earthly, so divine, so soothing.
In this maze of mirrors, your eyes are the only windows,
Feeding me utopic scenes of the way through this life.
Facing you, my guardian, I am silently rejuvenated.
A thousand desires appeased, yet a thousand born.
You've a gaze that lures me,
A scent that delights me,
A voice that calms me,
A touch that mends me,
And a radiance that heals me.
We needn't look to the skies for heavenly destiny,
Its path is from earth, on earth and to the earth.
Its treasures are amongst us and within us.
They need simply be acknowledged.
And I acknowledge that you are
Gaia's Gift.
Thoughts?