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psilomind
02-14-2003, 06:44 PM
Fellower's Sonnet

A widow's dove carves virtue upon a hand
A feather freed before time transgressed
A message resented by the will of a madman
And a scarlet ribbon now shown upon his breast
And now she sheds beneath the midnight sun
The tear that hid the night before
And prays the dove will one day come
With will of that which he abhors
Yet a shine aloof shows a vacant man
Cursing the distant light in jest
Who now returns with dove in hand
And lays his soul, his own to rest
But if only, if only he could remember
That he was her Jacob Fellower

mourningstar
02-14-2003, 10:01 PM
awesome.

psilomind
02-15-2003, 03:46 PM
Thanks. Hopefully I'll get some more replies, but I'm not so sure. Well if you do like it, just tell me and I'll add some more.

haftelm
02-18-2003, 04:55 PM
I like it

George Bush Sr.
02-18-2003, 05:38 PM
damn good.
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