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Convoy_X
02-12-2003, 02:51 AM
They say that.
We are eternal.
They say that.
Pain is an illusion.

Even when apart.
We are one together.
One day we will be.
Together once more.

For generations they will.
Talk of what we did.
Children of Children will know.
They can do, because we did.

I just need one moment.
To fill the touch of infinity.
I fell so empty and deeply black.
But I know it can be filled.
All I need is a touch from.
My three parts of infinity.
And I could cross deserts.

Convoy_X
02-12-2003, 05:44 AM
im noticeing that people are looking but dont seem to have anything to say... i just want some input...

Convoy_X
02-12-2003, 06:51 AM
i rewrote the last stanza it now goes...

I just need one moment.
To fill the embrace of infinity.
I fell an empty pit deep inside.
But I know it can be filled.
All I need is on more infinite moment.
And I could cross any desert.

what do ya'll think?