Stream of Conscious - Slave-Made

[ShackledEidolon]

Slave-Made

What can I really say?
You led me through another day
But your method leaves me abandoned

This cracked and grey earth
This continuously dreary twilight
Devoid of the yellows and red

I guess I’m grateful that I’m here to see
Without you I might not have lived
I didn’t really need them anyway

Thank you for showing me this
You know I never knew it could be like this
This twilight will never end

I knew you would see it my way
Welcome to this place you will call your own
Look upon all that we have won

It is all ours and nothing else can claim the same
We have all that we want and all that we need
And now we will never feel pain

Look not upon the sun for it will only blind you
Dream not of the star filled night for it would consume you
Live only in the twilight and become master of all you see

I suppose your right I would have never known
I’m so lucky to have you to show me my home
To think I so yearned for them both

This yoke doesn’t seem to bother me as much
I think I could get use to this
Thank you for giving all this to me

I told you that this would be for the best
I knew you would see it my way
You won’t need them anyway…. hush

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[ShackledEidolon]

Hmm I guess the italics didn't work on here when I pasted it in. Each time that the character shifts it is supposed to alternate between normal and italic type. The First 4 are normal, the next 3 are italics, next 2 are normal, the next 1 is italics...and then the last is normal. Maybe that will add more to this one

[SparklingOpiate]

I think this would have to be my favorite of the four so far...you should keep posting your stuff, i like it....