Completely Incomplete

[Rice]

Wading in my sea of cries
Completely incomplete by
Your symphonic
Your melodic
Lies

Grazing through mazes of confusion
Completely incomplete by
Everything that
You do not
Say

Completely incomplete

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Another one of mine

[Mark D]

Hey I like it Rice. Good job.

[Rice]

thank you mark d

:)

[Scooter]

"Completely incomplete by
Everything that
You do not
Say"

So simple and pretty and it says so much...the whole poem is beautiful, nice work :)

[dawn]

that is absolute beauty