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[psilomind]

This is a quick song that I wrote one night and includes severals concepts that I find quite interesting. One of which, I had noticed while I was drugged off my mind, but later found out was also a belief of mass murderer/genius George Trepal. This is the concept of "The Watcher", a sort of voice that dwells in the back of the mind, and really understands everything that is happening around the person.

Anyway... I'd like some opinions of my writing skills, hopefully positive ones, but feel free to criticize, leave death threats, etc. Here goes:

Conglomerate:

A light embraces this cadaver
Life its own at soul's expense
What could save us we now can't remember
Watching this vessel void of sense, but...

He blinds perception with his eyes
I know there's no contempt in his lies
But wanting desire drifts asunder
When reaching high fate pulls me under

And we've grown tired of you!
And we're watching
Always watching
Understanding you...



I know it's terrible, but the riffs are good.

[3rdeye]

its to bad that we cant hear the riffs

[the reverend]

Lyrics seem good.
Rather tool-like if i may say....

Would like to hear the song...
Have you recorded it?

[psilomind]

Originally posted by the reverend
Lyrics seem good.
Rather tool-like if i may say....

Would like to hear the song...
Have you recorded it?

Just the bass line so far (well this is the best part anyway), but I need to upload it. I'll be sure to tell you when I do though.

[psilomind]

I've finally uploaded the bass line (You can download it at
http://www.angelfire.com/biz6/sgprod/Conglomerate.mp3). Note that during the first minute or two there is supposed a guitar solo, so the bass line by itself may get boring (though I hope not). Enjoy!