Two of my writings

[Skate_03]

Here are some things I wrote recently. I'm gonna let you guys interpret them, and tell me what you think.

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THE END
To know the truth
And destroy all the questions
Is the highest goal of man
But to know the trurth
Is to lock the answer over again
How can we know so much, but never settle a thing?
Because the truth is hidden at the end

In the past I've been thrust the guesses
Like the others, passed down through need, tradition, and fear
Now I've dropped the guess and retrieved all the questions
When will I ever know what I'm headed for?
When it's too late
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MY RAGE, MY HYPOCRISY
The anger takes over,
Pushed me to my limits
I strike and yell, shooting to kill

The anger take over,
Pushing me to my limits
I try my hardest to make you hurt

When my emotion shifts,
Seeing things objectively,
I hear the anger taking over
Pushing him to his limits.
He strikes and yells, shooting to harm

I can't stand to hear what I am,
Knowing that I am just as bad.
The only justification is my anger and your actions
Teaming together to send me into rage.
If you only knew what you cause,
His rage, my contempt, my rage, my hypocrisy.

[Skate_03]

what do you guys think?

[Jebus]

I've never been into poetry (call it ignorance), but they were pretty good. I especially liked the 2nd one

[Skate_03]

this is an old post of mine but i wanted some more input. any help?