"Hold On"

[BrightyBrighty]

I wish I were getting points for being last in line
I'd be winning by now

I took a walk in the rain to hide my tears
And loose my self
My colors fade and run off
Just before going down the drain

I'm falling is slow motion
When my release from gravity failed me
Every one fall away
Fall away from me all

Please hold me now
Because I think I'm falling
Please take my hand and run away
Please take me to where I'll be ok

this and more at: http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=3455&alid=760

[psilomind]

Yeah I listened to this from the other thread... Its a shame that it got ignored, but I had nothing to say at the time, so...

Basically the melody and the likes were great, but as far as vocals and lyrics go, im not sure, I guess its not my type of music. Make it a little less whiney and a little more heart-felt, and youve got something going.

So in summary, its pretty good, but it could be better.

[BrightyBrighty]

umm ok...whatever.